Proof Read - PhD Chapter

Project Description: PhD Thesis – Chapter 6 (Discussion)

My PhD thesis comprises seven chapters.

Chapter 6 is the Discussion chapter, for which I have completed a full draft written in UK English.
The references are complete, accurate, and correctly formatted, and therefore do not require checking.
What I am seeking is a coherence and academic alignment review of Chapter 6, specifically assessing how effectively the discussion integrates with and responds to Chapters 1–5 (the literature review, methodology, findings, and theoretical framework). This includes clarity of argument, logical flow, and conceptual consistency, not content generation - The chapter is 10,000 words I also require you to read chapters 1 - 5 (35,000 words)

PhD is in Educational Technology and is a case study of business camps (edutainment) - more details will followtot he awardee.

Editor requirements:

Native English speaker

Academic background, preferably PhD-level

Demonstrable experience editing doctoral-level theses

UK English proficiency

Important conditions (please read before messaging)

I require human academic editing only. Please do not use AI tools (e.g. ChatGPT, Claude, Scribbr, or similar). I am familiar with these tools and can identify their use.

Previous experiences have involved paying premium rates only to later discover AI-assisted editing; this is explicitly not acceptable.

I am seeking to work directly with the named editor. I will not engage with accounts that present as individuals but outsource work to unnamed third parties or teams.

Stock photography, generic profiles, or misrepresentation of who is completing the work will result in immediate disengagement.

Finally, if we have worked together previously, please note that I am only considering new collaborators for this project.

Thank you for your understanding, and I look forward to hearing from suitably qualified editors.



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