Hi,

Well done for all your hard work. Now, with my expertise and fresh set of eyes, let me help you make your story the best it can be.

As your beta reader I will give detailed feedback on:

Plot,

Development,

Author Voice,

Themes,

Characters,

Dialogue,

Setting/Aesthetic,

Any specific areas that you wish.

From a reader's perspective, I will read through your Word document and add comments and critiques to your manuscript. I will also provide a 1-2 page reader report answering questions centered around these categories:

Was your first chapter gripping enough to hold my attention?

How was the character development?

What were some of my favorite parts?

Was anything confusing?

How was the plot flow/readability?

Are there moments where the story lagged?

Was the dialogue natural?

Was the ending worth reading the whole book?Would I change anything?

Any errors or inconsistencies?

This feedback is delivered to you in the form of a Reader Report. I cover your strengths as well as areas that I feel need developing (always linking closely to your text). This report is designed to be developmental, and used as a source for you to continue your drafting process.

I welcome all genres, and I'm happy to create custom quotes.

Look forward to working with you.