Alert: Christian Authors

Hey! Thanks for being here =)

I am a believer who loves to read and often have thoughts as to why the author has included/excluded something. Beta reading has given me the opportunity to touch bases with the author and let them know what is bothering me or questions I have about the story. Proofing has just come along with the read. I sometimes can't believe the mistakes I find in published work.

I am super new at this, but promise to give you honest feedback. I have a good understanding of the BIBLE as well.

Sample of questions I'll answer:

Is the story engaging? Do I want to keep reading after chapter one? Is there too much fluff?

Are the characters interesting? Who do I like/dislike? Why?

Is the dialogue believable? Do I know who is talking?

Can I see what is happening? Can I see where it is happening?

Is the story dragging? Do I need more/less information?