All Services Writing & Translation books Developmental Editing $5/hr · Starting at $25 I will read your work and:Check for continuity errors eg. Someone’s eyes turn from blue to brown halfway through your manuscript.Advise how to improve readability for your target audience.Give advice on scene-building.Advice on occurrence or passive voice.Advice on POV switches. (point of view) Check for plot holes. About $5/hr · Ongoing Download Resume I will read your work and:Check for continuity errors eg. Someone’s eyes turn from blue to brown halfway through your manuscript.Advise how to improve readability for your target audience.Give advice on scene-building.Advice on occurrence or passive voice.Advice on POV switches. (point of view) Check for plot holes. Skills & Expertise Book EditingBook ProposalsBook WritingContemporary FictionDevelopmental EditingeBook WritingEditingFiction WritingLiterary FictionManuscriptsPublishingReadingRomance WritingShort StoriesStory Writing 0 Reviews This Freelancer has not received any feedback. Browse Similar Freelance Experts EditorsMicrosoft Word ExpertsBook EditorsProofreadersFiction WritersTechnical EditorsRomance WritersBook WritersShort Story WritersLiterary Fiction WritersReading SpecialistsManuscript WritersCopy EditorsEbook WritersStory WritersPublishersDevelopmental Editors