I provide detailed, constructive, and actionable feedback on screenplays, tv shows, and narrative projects.
My analysis focuses on character development, emotional engagement, dramatic structure, pacing, dialogue, thematic coherence, and the overall strength of the story.
Whether you are preparing a screenplay for producers, a festival submission, or a novel for publication, my goal is to help you identify your project’s strengths, clarify its weaknesses, and elevate its full potential while respecting your creative vision.
My Offers:
SCREENPLAY COVERAGE
For short films, feature films and series pilots.
350 €
- Complete screenplay reading
- 5–8 pages professional coverage report
- Structure analysis
- Character development analysis
- Pacing and dramatic tension assessment
- Strengths and areas for improvement
- Actionable recommendations
Delivered in French or English
DEVELOPMENT CONSULTATION
For writers seeking in-depth feedback and project development guidance.
750 €
- Complete screenplay reading
- Detailed development notes
- Character, theme and narrative analysis
- Creative and strategic recommendations
- 60-minute video consultation
- Written follow-up included
Delivered in French or English
PRODUCER'S PERSPECTIVE PACKAGE
For projects preparing for producers, funding applications, labs or festivals.
850 €
- Comprehensive screenplay evaluation
- Advanced development notes
- Producer's assessment of the project's strengths and challenges
- Strategic recommendations for further development
- Positioning advice for festivals, markets and funding opportunities
- 90-minute video consultation
- Written action plan for next development steps
Delivered in French or English
If you are looking for a professional perspective on your screenplay, short film, feature film or series project, I would be delighted to learn more about your work and explore how I can support its development.
My pleasure,
Narjiss J