I'm a published author (Simon & Schuster, Macmillan) and experienced writing coach. I've helped hundreds of college-bound students improve their personal statements. Send me your application essay/personal statement for a review today! Tips Use a unique concept (or an unusual spin on a common topic). Highlight your values. Personalize the prompt with specific, concrete examples from your own life. You don't want your essay about the big game, attaining your Eagle Scout rank or that mission trip to sound like umpteen other applicants. Don't belabor the thesaurus. Give challenging circumstances a positive spin. Show, don't tell, your story. Be humble and don't be afraid to reveal that you are imperfect. Perfect people are boring.