I will help you proofread and improve your personal statement to reflect your best self to the admissions department. I have been accepted to an Ivy League university, so have a good idea of how to write a compelling narrative-- the key aspect is to be yourself, and having basic errors will distract them from your life story. I will give you feedback on spelling, grammar, syntax, flow, and thematic or structural changes. NB: I will not write your personal statement for you. I believe in the power of your voice to tell your story and would not want to stifle that. I am here to give you advice on how to show your story to the admissions office, not to rewrite your narrative.