Looking for objective feedback on your writing? 

Uncertain about how well your story hangs together, or whether your characters are engaging and plausible? Send your work to me for the feedback!

I will beta read your book, short story, or article and provide a detailed, constructive critique. My feedback will include commentary and analyses on structure, voice, reader engagement, language use, and anything else I find that may help you develop your work to its potential. If necessary, I'll provide a sample edit for spelling, grammar, or writing techniques.

I understand how exciting finishing a novel can be and the nervousness about receiving your first feedback. I hope to make this process as enjoyable and constructive as possible. I can't wait to read what you have written! 

When you collaborate with me, you will receive a constructive critique. I will provide comments via Track Changes within Microsoft Word. (If you do not have Microsoft Word, please contact me and we can discuss alternative methods.) 

You will also receive a separate detailed report, commenting on:

• Opening Scene
• Characterisation and Motivation
• Plot and Conflict
• Pacing
• Setting and World-building
• Dialogue
• Craft
• Overall Impressions

Feel free to contact me with your queries.