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$35/hr Starting at $70

Developmental editing—one of my passions and one of my strengths—focuses on your work’s content, overall structure, organization, and other global elements and takes place before copy editing.

Whether your manuscript is fiction or nonfiction, as your developmental editor, I either deliver a detailed revision plan for you to consider when you prepare your next draft or I will work in consultation with you and make the developmental changes directly in the manuscript. For points addressed in fiction and non-fiction developmental editing, please see my Portfolio. 

If you choose to receive a plan and revise the manuscript yourself, the plan will include a description of the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for enhancing the work.The comments are organized by category and by relative importance to the work. Specific examples are cited by page, paragraph, and line for easy reference. Conversations between author and editor typically follow delivery of the revision plan.

If you choose applied developmental editing, I will work with you closely throughout the edit to assure that any major changes or significant points have your approval or collaborative input before they are implemented.

As a full-service editor, I also offer substantive editing, copy editing, and proofreading.

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Developmental editing—one of my passions and one of my strengths—focuses on your work’s content, overall structure, organization, and other global elements and takes place before copy editing.

Whether your manuscript is fiction or nonfiction, as your developmental editor, I either deliver a detailed revision plan for you to consider when you prepare your next draft or I will work in consultation with you and make the developmental changes directly in the manuscript. For points addressed in fiction and non-fiction developmental editing, please see my Portfolio. 

If you choose to receive a plan and revise the manuscript yourself, the plan will include a description of the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for enhancing the work.The comments are organized by category and by relative importance to the work. Specific examples are cited by page, paragraph, and line for easy reference. Conversations between author and editor typically follow delivery of the revision plan.

If you choose applied developmental editing, I will work with you closely throughout the edit to assure that any major changes or significant points have your approval or collaborative input before they are implemented.

As a full-service editor, I also offer substantive editing, copy editing, and proofreading.

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Book EditingBusinessCharacter DesignContemporary FictionContemporary LiteratureCustomer ServiceDevelopmental Editinge-BooksEditingEducationLiterary CriticismLiterary FictionMemoirsNarrationNonfictionNovelsScience Fiction WritingSettingSocial SciencesSpiritualityStructural EngineeringThesis

101 Reviews

  • Geoff246 says,

    Kay’s feedback on a short story of mine was generous and insightful. She grasped the emotional core—charged nostalgia and an undercurrent of loss—and helped me shape the narrative to heighten its impact while preserving its lyrical tone. Her suggestions aligned with what the story was already reaching for and showed me how to get there more effectively. I especially appreciated her encouragement to restore elements from an earlier draft that gave the story its raw intensity—her comments affirmed what I’d only half-admitted to myself. She was keenly attuned to voice and rhythm, offering edits that preserved the narrator’s childlike perspective while tightening the prose. Her feedback never felt generic—it was precise, perceptive, and clearly rooted in deep engagement with the text. Thanks to her guidance, the story became sharper, more resonant, and truer to its intent.

    for 1315-word short story on Jun 24, 2025

  • Melody 34 says,

    Great to work with. Valuable suggestions to fine tune my work.

    for Writer edutor a few short memoirs storie on Jun 11, 2025

  • Adele 11 says,

    Kay is a great partner in making my work shine, thank you Kay!

    for Ediitng Game Plans on May 02, 2025

  • 397647 says,

    She's great. I am glad I picked her to edit my book.

    for Need a copy editor for a nonfiction book on Apr 24, 2025

  • 397647 says,

    She does great work.

    for Need a copy editor for a nonfiction book on Dec 26, 2024

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