Applying to college can be overwhelming. You want everything to be perfect, and you want your application to reflect your potential. The essays you submit are central to that, and the difference between a strong essay and a weak one can easily be the difference between catching the attention of an admissions officer or being passed over.
I'm here to help with that.
All I need from you is a draft. I need you to give me the raw material for a good story, laid out in roughly the shape of an essay or personal statement.
I'll work with that, giving you a combination of feedback and suggestions, and then do an extremely in-depth line-by-line edit. I'll change the essay's rhythm and pacing as needed, give it just the slightest element of drama and energy, and ensure that each piece flows smoothly into the next. I'll highlight your achievements and state their value and relevance in plain, undeniable language.
And, of course, I'll catch any grammatical, technical, and stylistic issues that need tending to.
When we're done, your essay will be graceful, clean, and tight, and will make a material contribution to the strength of your application